This is awesome Lucas! First off, I also love Owishi! There is one about 10 minutes from my house and my family and I love to go regularly. I like the way you tell this story through a timeline and I also really liked how you returned to the theme to close the piece.
Great job, I liked how the theme was relatable, and I also like your title.
i really connected to the story, my favorite one so far
Good picture choice, it really added on to the video well
Good essay, you had some awkard pauses that could be fixed
I really like the way you set up telling this story. You described the experience you had and the people you had it with very well. Your video flows really nicely and I now really want to visit this restaurant...it sounds amazing! Keep up the good work, and nice job Lucas!
Wow, I really liked that it was very forceful and great. I really liked that balance you had between your voice and the mucis I could hear you perfectly. Jeep up the great work.
That was great story telling, it was able to really hold my interest!
Great job narrating the story. Also, the volume of your voice and the music were perfect. Great job!
I'm hungry just listening to this video. It is a great story about a great place to eat, but more importantly, is about a friendship and respect for a person who does his job well. Period nice video
I was hungry before I watched this video, now I'm starving. Nice job!
I watched this when I haven't had food yet today. I may starve to death, nice job!
8th Grader at The Fenn School